nightfeather of no clan (loner)

Cat's Name: Nightfeather
Gender: Female
Age(In moons): 14 Moons (Adult)
Clan: None
Position: Loner
Appearance(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): She has high, sharp ears that are always twitching when she hears something. Her eyes are deep green, but they seem a little brighter at sunset. Her body is black and as sleek and thin as any loner. She's missing three claws, one on her left back paw and twon on her front paws. Her tail is very long and the fur at the end is sharp, like a knife.
Personality(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): She has a dark personality, and is always looking around her for danger. She hates other cats, she curses at other rouges as the pass and kills any clan cats she meets. She can smell her prey with ease, and always hits her mark. She loves to catch fish in the river, as she is almost never interrupted. She is vicious in a fight and amost always wins.
History(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): Nightfeather was born an echoclan cat,where she was happy until an older cat took a dislike to her. He made sure she got less food than the other kits, and told the clan leader not to let her be an apprentice. In the end she was an apprentice, and she always brought back plenty of food for the clan. This made the olde cat angry, and he stole fresh kill from the pile and blamed it on nightfeather. She got in trouble and she became vengeful. When she finally became a warrior, nobody liked her, and it was the older cats fault. One day, as he was out hunting, she followed him. Nightfeather was more agile than the other, and she attacked him, and then returned to camp. In the end they blamed her for killing the older cat and she was chased out of echoclan.
Roleplay Example(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): Nightfeather began to creep slowly up on the bird, watching its every move. It was a crow, and would make an eccelant meal. She tensed her body to spring, and leapt from where she was hiding but her claws grasped air, and she was confused. tThen she noticed the other cat, standing over her prey's carcasse. She hissed at him, waving her tail menacingly. He hissed back, and she jumped at him, kicking and biting. He was unprepared, and she bit deep into his throat, killing him. She stood and began to walk away, taking her prey with her. She didnt look back to see who she had killed, but in her heart she knew.
(( If you've already had a character approved, you do not have to do another roleplay example!!!))

Can you add capitalization and whatnot to your sign up please?

sorry, i will

Much better ^^

is nightfeather approved?

I believe so. I'll move this to the accepted characters now.