Moonfeather of EchoClan application

Cat's Name: Moonfeather
Gender: Female
Age(In moons): 23
Clan: EchoClan
Position: Warrior
Appearance(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): Moonfeather is a beautiful silver she-cat. She has black and white swirls on her back and chest and black ear-tips. She is very slender and her fur seems to shine in moonlight. She has bright green eyes. She is thin, but don't underestimate that, for she is very strong behind that thin frame.
Personality(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): She is hot-tempered if you anger her, but she is usually kind. She loves kits and apprentices and will do whatever she can to help them out. She is loyal and trustworthy; if you tell her something she will not repeat it unless she has to. She will always fight for what she believes in. Lastly, when she is focusing, she will block out everything and become a completely different cat.
History(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences): She was born a rogue and came to EchoClan at 7 moons old. Her parents had abandoned her to find a new home when TwoLegs invaded the alley they lived in. She was taken in as an apprentice and quickly picked up on the warrior code. Her sister went to another pack of rouges and she was soon killed. Moonfeather has grown to be a strong warrior an entirely forgotten the ways of a rogue.
Roleplay Example(at least a paragraph;5+ sentences):
Moonfeather padded over to the nursery. "Are you hungry, Whitetail? I brought you some fresh-kill." She dropped it at Whitetail's feet. She heard the deputy call her name for the sunhigh patrol. "Sorry, I have to go. See you later!"